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Like my poem? Any title suggestions?

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She took a walk in the park

just to get some fresh air

as she turned her head

her perspective changed on life.

A little on the swings

flying high

as though all her problems

(if she had any)

had left her mind

so free

so careless

worriless.

She had not felt

such emotions

in so very long,

thought of life

as a time to grief

time to worry

not to enjoy

Life- which she was sure was strictly for grief, became footloose and fancy-free.

As she took a walk in the park

just to get some fresh air

she turned her head

and her perspective changed on life.

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  1. Um...i love the poem!! its great!! but try something like...Life or Walk in the park or something like that.


  2. well....................................... GREAT but i thinhk the name should be random

  3. yay it makes you guess what changed her life

    sorry im not a poetic person but thats my opinion

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  4. Wow!! i really like that!!

    My Ideas:

    Perspectives in the Park

    Swinging Thorough Life

    A Walk in the Park (so original!!)

    I love your poem i hope you continue writing!

  5. sorry don't like it but I'm picky

  6. not bad and thats true that can happen u can call it coming into the new or the life i couldnt see or maybe serenity

  7. I like it, but you could clean it up a little. Maybe it could be called "Fresh Perspective" or "The Walk"

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