Like my poem???

Question

used to yell and scream about

pick a fight without a doubt

once i thought this life is lame

on everyone i put the blame

was that hot day the stork arrived

hours on end i stared into your eyes

the world was now a differnt place

all it took was my sons imbrace

cant even stomp that lil bug

all because that first gentle hug

on that day i change within

thats why i say we are twins

Answer 1

I think its talking about stop trying to "fight with the world" and rather learning to love it.

Its definitely interesting. Keep writing!

Answer 2

good

Answer 3

You do with less slang but the plot is good 4 out of 4!

Answer 4

Sweet and nice flow, another great one. in the last stanza, try changing 'change' to 'changed' it continues the past tense, of 'on that day'. Stay strong.

Answer 5

Inspirational!!!! Awesome!!!  Keep Writing!!!