Like my poem? yes/no/maybe so? (i have a couple) rate by favorite (ex. 1,2,3))?

Question

My heavy heart weighs me down,

as a weep on the bitter ground,

The earth is silent without a sound,

I need to be homeward-bound.

I call you from a distance,

but you cannot hear my cry,

I sit here and watch the clouds pass by,

I ask myself why did our love die?

You never really loved me,

i know it in my heart,

I am but a shadow in your presence,

a figure in the dark,

One day you'll see,

all you needed was me,

Soon you'll realize,

I was always by your side.

Answer 1

Pretty much.........

Answer 2

It's o.k., well balanced at tad cautious in the reading because of the working nature however all together enjoyable, well done.

Answer 3

Yes .... definantly like your poem =)

Answer 4

pretty interesting im a poet as well but only in nature and love very good its very good from my perspective

Answer 5

i really do like your poem it's well written and behind the words it really means something.  their all just so womderful. again, i LOVED them! =D