Listen my amateur song and tell me ?

Question

I would like to get your opinions, one by one :))

How is the composition,

How is my voice? Does it touch you? :))

How it sound on your music system? Any instrument (such as bass) sounded terrible? This is important

Are you going to listen again?

And any other suggestion

http://dandini90.com/files/sakin-ol.mp3

Answer 1

My sister thinks it's very good and very touching.

I think its just good

Answer 2

How is the composition,

I really liked it.  I was reminiscent of early Floyd and 70s prog rock music but wuth the contemporary touch too.

How is my voice? Does it touch you? :))

To be perfectly honest, I felt that your voice was the weakest aspect of the song.  For one thing it wasn't very strong, and secondly it was hard to hear in the mix of things.  It sonuds as if you have rather over synthesised it.

How it sound on your music system? Any instrument (such as bass) sounded terrible? This is important

It was a great balance - apart from the vocal, which I mentioned before.

Are you going to listen again?

I've got a lot of music to listen to.  Probably not.

And any other suggestion

Keep at it.  Never give up

Thanks for letting us hear.  It takes courage.