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Little poem :D let me know what you think

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Tonight I was the sparrow

Shot threw the neck by a double edged arrow

And the sand still lie between my toes

From the beach, where ocean water flows

And for this moment I will forever curse her name off my lips,

To know that this will be the last time to ever feel her kiss.

To ever feel her heartbeat up against mine

As slowly our legs became warm and bodies entwined

The night that we shared I was to whisper in your ear

That this is the only way you’ll ever feel again my dear

It was the feeling of love running through my veins

The feeling that hurt will never come your way

If only she knew I would offer the world to her

That her beautiful soul could be the one I saviour

And if she wore lipstick im sure it would glow

Like the brightened street light outside my window

And so that night to the ground I hit with a groan inside my chest

That you’re the one who shot this bow and laid me here to rest.

And I pulled the arrow out that you tried to lodge into my neck,

clasped my hands over the wound that was this sudden wreck.

And it poured like a fountain down the arm

and the trickle drowned the entire of my palm

I screamed at you for never to forget anything we share

collapsing as her words are slow she mutters I will always care

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  1. wow- i wish i could write poems like yours :)

    great work

    * Star*


  2. fabulous

  3. thats pretty amazing

    (:

  4. hope i will be as good as you one day haha

    could you trell me what you think of mine

    thanks

    well done 2 haha

    x

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