Lol what do you think?

Question

jack once was nimble

jack once was quick,

and yes once he jumped over

a candlestick

he was drunk

that faithful night

but now he's sober

and his sugar is high

he can't be drinking

so no more candlesticks

he lives in a two story

just past the bricks

just He and his wife

the kids have grown

now his grandkids

tease him on

jumping over a candle

wow, what a leap

but he's made millions

from a drunken feat

Answer 1

omg that is hillarious. you are so funny, i want more

Answer 2

For a quicky it is very good.

A suggestion if I may. Change Sugar is high to ...is right. It will rhyme with night.

Perhaps ..strongly made of bricks, also Tease him when alone. It will rhyme with grown.

We done

Robert

Answer 3

I like it

Its a funny poem lol

Answer 4

JUMPING OVER A CANDLE ,

BURNS YOUR AGLE ,

SAY , THAT WAS OK ,

IF YOUR ON TODAY , OR OUT TO PLAY ,

CHECK OUT FREEDOMFREE ,

HES COMMING YOUR WAY ,

NOW I SEE , REAL POETRY OK ,

ILL BE RIGHT BACK , IM RUNNING OUT ,

OF HEALTHY SNACKS .

Answer 5

LOL

That hilarious

:P