Look at my google adword?

Question

I have an organic dog treat site (http://www.mypetsloveit.com)

and I created a google adwords:

"Tasty Organic Dog Treats

Home made natural dog treats.

Wonderful Gift with Free Shipping

www.mypetsloveitonline.com"

Can you guys come up with a better ad...some that are doing well on google are

"Dog Treat

Handmade Dog Treat In A Bakery

With Human Grade Ingredients

www.livercookies.com"

"Buy Organic Dog Treats

All-Natural Hand-Baked Dog Treats

Up to 50% Off All Orders Now

adogslife.net"

so far DOG is the keyword that is actually bringing me Click thru

Answer 1

I use adsense too just like Chris and I dont see why Chris would come across your ad just because he uses adsense. Just because he did not see your ad, does not mean your ad is not being seen. There's millions of ads out there. Why not just use the google adwords tool to find keywords that have low advertiser competition but high search rate: https://adwords.google.com/select/Keywor...

Answer 2

i used adscense and never saw that ad

Answer 3

You're trying to cram too much information in there. Keep it brief and make sure it's readable.

Examples:

Organic Dog Treats

Home made. 100% natural.

Grear gift. Free Shipping.

www.MyPetsLoveitOnline.com

Organic Dog Biscuits

High-quality, natural ingredients.

Try them & see. Free Shipping.

www.MyPetsLoveitOnline.com