Love poem, I'm still new to this!?

Question

I'm still pretty new to writing poems. Some friendly advice is welcome and opinions of course (polite ones please)

Pretending you never happened

The constant lies are too much

Pretending the connection was never there

Memories all I have to clutch

Pretending that your words don't kill me

You know things shouldn't be this way

Pretending that I didn't just catch you staring

I wish you could hear silent pleas

Pretending that you never wanted me

Are we both ashamed? Or perhaps afraid

Pretending that the dance was never done

Why can't you just fade?

I fall to pieces

You hold back

Love decreases

My world becomes black

I am in love with you.

You said you love me

That was your cue

So why can't we agree?

No more lies

Take my hand

Look at me in the eyes

Help me understand

Answer 1

Its great!keep writing poems,you're really good!

Answer 2

i really like this poem