Love short story- what do you think.?

Question

I wrote a love story about this girl who I like. It is the first draft so Im sorry about the bad spelling/grammer parts. I was going to send to one of those girly magazines, since they have those kind of things. What magazine you suggest? Also, should I send it to the girl. Here is the passage, enjoy:

Answer 1

I like it.

Answer 2

AWWW!!! that's soooo sweet!!! I agree you should give it to her!!! GO KATIE!!!! I didn't even catch any spelling errors....I got caught up in your love!!! AWWWW....your so sweet!!! Stay that way!!!!

Answer 3

that is so sweet! u should give it to her...she'll love it even if she is already dating someone else