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Vanilla light

Smothering scents of vanilla

Eclipe her senses .

A grand light born

Of a thousand candles

Light the way

The wanton voice

Of he that beckons

breaks her pause

Deep pain of a love

Lost still linger

The other man

From another time

to be buried

The wanton voice

Calls out again

It's time she decides

Time to move on.

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  1. excellent  


  2. a little oblique for me,, but very evocative of lost love,, I can smell the candles
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