MET AND BASEBALL FANS!!! What do you think of this poem/song?

Question

I wrote this first as a song, but in the end it's more of a poem. Anyway, hope you like it.

I remember when I was just a kid

I went to my first game and it felt like this

I felt the cool air take control of my soul

and felt my passion be hit by a ball

Then something got injected in me

I saw something I couldn't before see

Then all of a sudden my heart started to pound

As if my body was being controlled by a sound

(Lets Go Mets Chant)

Chorus- The Mets Are The BEST! (rep.2x)

I see them win and see them lose

But in the end you'll keep hearing boos

(boos)

Now I'm older and nothing seems right

They're actually winning and putting up a fight

As well as the Phillies who never were that good

At least they're lovable, well at least they should

The Braves used to be the team we feared

But who really cares, cause I like to cheer

(Lets Go Mets Chant)

(Chorus)

(cont.)

Answer 1

Its actually not bad. Not great... but not bad. Out of ten thats at least a 5.5