MTG deck help w//b?

Question

hey, im trying to create a w/b deck with the cards from eventide, but its pretty hard since there isnt much synergy. i attempted to make a fun deck out of the w/b cards i could use some help. rate on a scale of 1-10, where 5 is better than a theme deck. also, feel free to modify. thanks.

Creatures (18)

4 Divinity of Pride

2 Deathbringer liege

2 Restless apparition

4 Archon of justice

3 Suture spirit

3 Oracle of nectars

Other Spells (20)

2 Polluted Bonds

2 Rite of consumption

3 edge of divinity

2 recumbent bliss

3 unmake

2 light from within

2 beseech the queen

2 endless horizons

2 batwing brume

11 swamp

13 plains

Answer 1

its not bad, i would give it a 6

here are my worries with this deck

1.  its slow, the cards you need to win will take you a while to play and im not sure if you have significant enough defenses

2. as good as life gain may seem if your oppoenent is playing a very aggesive deck you wont gain life fast enough

3. it has 62 cards in it. you should reduce it to 60 to increase the chance you will get a card you need

some card suggestions are

nip gwyllion (its fits your theme and your colors)

voracious hatchling (fits theme and color)

add a 4th unmake (you cant go wrong with those)

beseech the queen is harder to play than it looks, you need 3 swamps or it will cost much more than 3 mana. with your current selection of lands and lack of mana fixers its going to be hard to play early on. and late game it may not matter. add some color fixers.

Answer 2

Add Fetid Heath to your lands

I don't know about the Restless Apparition.  The 3 mana ability seems a bit much.

Patron Signaler can help when you need more attackers.

A couple of your cards aren't from Eventide.  Oracle of Nectars and Polluted Bonds.

But overall, I would give it a 7 compared to your scale.