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MY PEOM! do you like?

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I take on step forward

And find myself taking a million back

Every day that goes by

I find a million more mistakes i have left in my tracks.

Some say i'm perfect

Is there such thing?

Im far from it,

im as far from perfect as winter is to spring.

Everyday life is a struggle.

The good with the bad

The happy with the sad

Many people ask is it worth living?

What do we live for?

Is all the stuggle really worth it all?

I climb so far up, just to fall.

Lifes great one day,

sad the next.

Truly i don't know what to exspect

Who truly can we trust,

is it love or lust?

questions i ask myself everyday

As i put on a fake smile, and be the person i portray

I'm sick of being hurt!

The pains to much.

I'm stuck in this worlds clutch!

Though yet i believe there is more worth living for.

Because for every door that closes appears and open door..

Things will get better i tell myself.

You've just gotta belive in yourself.

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  1. You might want to check the spelling before you post it on myspace...


  2. Fix the spelling and grammar.

  3. yes but i would re word the drug addict part to say if i were a drug addict you would be my meth

  4. Loved it!

  5. I like your PEOM, but i really think you need to adjust a few places because there r too many syllables at once, and it just sort of stops the flow.....you yeah, and please check spelling and punctuation.

    pretty good!
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