Machine otk deck?

Question

here is my machine otk deck please r/f thx in advance

monsters 22

2 cyber dragon

3 proto cyber dragon

2 jinzo

3 cyber valley

3 cyber phoenix

3 dekoichi the battle chanted locomotive

morphing jar

2 the light hex sealed fusion

sangan

blowblack dragon

barrel dragon

spells 12

limiter removal

2 power bond

future fusion

overload fusion

monster reborn

heavy storm

giant trunade

mystical space typhoon

card destruction

2 hand destruction

traps 8

3 jar of greed

3 legacy of yata garasu

2 good goblin house keeping

fusion 10

3 cyber end dragon

3 cyber twin dragon

3 chimeratech overdragon

gatling dragon

Answer 1

MONSTERS:20

black, check the new banned list, jinzo's been at 3 for a few months now. call of the haunted is banned, limiter removal is at 1, and i just don't like either one of your builds, theres better draw power than legacey and jar of greed so those have to go, good goblin is just a wasted card so we have more room for better traps, you WILL eventually need a mirror force so +1, torrential needs to be in here as for it's usefulness anywhere, try 3 threatening roars in case the otk gets screwed up.I'm going to keep this deck at 2 jinzo's so 5 traps is all you'll need.

For the monsters,

pretty much of it is all right, i won't change a whole lot,

you'll probabley only need 1 valley so we'll take that out as you may need some more money for that mirror force and the other changes, light hex sealeds are not needed as you have 3 proto cyber dragons in here allready, blowback and barrel DO NOT HELP THIS OTK AT ALL so those 2 need to go, you'll need a card trooper to dump more machines for overload, add in a marshmallon and a spirit reaper just for the stall.

Spells,  everything looks good, just add in one more power bond, heres a trick,

future fusion a 5600 atk chimeratech, overload the material so you have a 5600 atk chimtech on one turn, stead of 2.

less wait is what this deck is all about

your fusions, all you'll need is the chimeratechs, of course, twins couldn't hurt, everything else is not needed.

truly, your build is MUCH better than black cat's.

Answer 2

JINZO=LIMITED TO 1

( 7.4 out of 10 ) That's my rating, now here's some suggestions for your deck bro, enjoy

MONSTERS:20

x2 Cyber Dragon

x2 Cyber Pheonix

x2 Cyber Valley

x2 Cyber Kirin

x3 Shining Angel

x3 Proto-Cyber Dragon

x2 The Light-Hex Sealed Fusion

x2 The Dark-Hex Sealed Fusion

x1 Barell Dragon

x1 Blowback Dragon

SPELLS:15

x2 Power Bond

x2 Limiter Removal

x2 Magical Mallet

x1 Mystical Space Typhoon

x1 Monster Reborn

x1 Monster Reincarnation

x1 Premature Burial

x1 Pot of Avarice

x1 Overload Fusion

x1 Future Fusion

x1 Recycle

x1 Second Coin Toss

TRAPS:8

x2 Jar of Greed

x2 Call of the Earthbound

x1 Magic Cylinder

x1 Trap Jammer

x1 Draining Sheild

x1 Dust Tornado

FUSION DECK:12

x3 Cyber End Dragon

x3 Cyber Twin Dragon

x3 Chimeratech Over Dragon

x3 Gatling Dragon