Made a new deck, can u rate it?

Question

deck #1

i dont use the decks in tournaments

monsters

-lord of d.

-grand tiki elder

-masked beast des gardius

-valkyrion the magna warrior

-blue eyes ultimate dragon

-blue eyes white dragon x3

-witch of the black forest

-alpha the magnet warrior

-beta the magnet warrior

-gamma the magnet warrior

-melchid the four-face beast

-sphinx teleia

-red eyes black dragon

-blue eyes shining dragon

-theinen the great sphinx

-red eyes black chick

-andro sphinx

-sangan

-cyber jar

magic cards

-flute of summoning dragon x2

-swords of revealing light

-the mask of remnants

-thunder crash

-de-spell

-monster reborn

-chosen one

-mask of brutality

-mask of the accursed

-polymerization

-spirit message "i"

-spirit massage "n"

-spirit massage "a"

-spirit massage "l"

trap cards

-destiny board

-sakuretsu armor

-shift

-mask of weakness

-pyramid of light

Answer 1

Whoa! Alright, pick a type you should almost never have Blue-Eyes and Red-Eyes in the same deck, it's an overload of high leveled dragons without effects. Blue-Eyes has the benefit of fusion but Red-Eyes has more support cards. Next, remove Grand Tiki Elder it's a peice of junk, only 1500 atk and no effect. Next Don't have the Magnet Warriors in a Dragon Deck, so before I continue pick a theme: Blue-Eyes, Red-Eyes, Valkyrion, or Theinin, NEVER use all of these in the same deck, with Valkyrion you can put it in a basic deck and it'll make a good lead card. With Theinin you're going to need life points to spare and in a Blue or Red eyes deck it's not going to happen. Next on the list Destiny Board (FINAL), is a side-deck card set, they are okay cards in a proper deck but definitely not this one. You went way to random, sure decks don't NEED a theme but for sure they need some sort of working together, if the cards don't work and flow together you're never going to win. Yeah; you need to work on one type, theme, or card set and not all at once, it's okay to have more than one deck instead of putting a billion cards in one deck. Good Luck

Answer 2

7/10