Matrimonial proverb: please critique. Would anyone today listen to this?

Question

What does a dove have in common

with a flying fish?

Can a dove teach anything

to a flying fish?

How long can a dove fly,

if she's flying with a flying fish?

Answer 1

It's good, but the only thing is that it made me laugh.  I don't know if humor was what you were going for, but it was a little funny.  When you use the word "proverb" many expect a serious statement, but otherwise I really liked it.  It's compact, but strong;)

If it's not too much trouble:  http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...