May I be so brash as to intrude once more?

Question

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WORKING GIRL

The moistened roots of your hair

let loose a smell unlike ordinary women,

A thick musk I can take hold of,

Nostril flaring scent, a bait in your mantrap.

The beads of moisture roll off you

down alpine slopes, deliciously dirty,

You work and make movements

poetry does no justice to.

A handful of you is dusty golden,

Washed down the bed, you turn

boulders to rocks and sway with

sandy grit sensations.

*****

Answer 1

I think u just wowed me i'm seriously in like awe right now, its beautiful and kepp writing because even that little bit shows some major talent, and it's insightful as to some of ure thoughts so do as they say and write what u know.

Answer 2

I'm laughing as I write this, but it really sounds like you're talking about a horse.

Sorry if I missed something!

Answer 3

Oh - my imagery is failing - I'd rather see the muddy river - gouging out its channel - in the bottom of the Grand Canyon. ♥

Answer 4

Whew-- shower time, just great, tastefully done! Cheers !!!

Answer 5

your secretary?

your gardner?

its sweat equity.

Answer 6

Oh! My! God!  yes yes yes.

Answer 7

This is not brash; it is gold. If you keep posting I will get no work done today.

Answer 8

I can't possibly top Pat's answer...LOL

Tastefully erotic and just a little dirty ;)  Very nice.

Answer 9

Nothing's been the same since you bought those shares in Kleenex.