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Meaningful Love?

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"Meaningful Love"

What the bad news was

became apparent too late

for us to do anything good about it.

I was offered no urgent dreaming,

didn't need a name or anything.

Everything was taken care of.

In the medium-size city of my awareness

voles are building colossi.

The blue room is over there.

He put out no feelers.

The day was all as one to him.

Some days he never leaves his room

and those are the best days,

by far.

There were morose gardens farther down the slope,

anthills that looked like they belonged there.

The sausages were undercooked,

the wine too cold, the bread molten.

Who said to bring sweaters?

The climate's not that dependable.

The Atlantic crawled slowly to the left

pinning a message on the unbound golden hair of sleeping maidens,

a ruse for next time,

where fire and water are rampant in the streets,

the gate closed--no visitors today

or any evident heartbeat.

I got rid of the book of fairy tales,

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  1. Nice poem!


  2. Life and feeling alive is love, love is ones own, we share it but if it comes from us is ours to give or to take, so hurt should not be mentioned, becaus if you do, then it's only you who is herting yourself.

    People don't hurt you if one learns to feel to our own emotions. So meaningful love is to know the meaning! One is love!

  3. It,s pretty deep. I feel it is about confusion of self. A search for a real purpose in life that you know exists but are in a transient state of lost thought. Awareness of whats around you but oblivious to realty. A lost soul in search of a surety that  is real but just beyond your grasp.
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