Metaphorically speaking. Metaphorically Speaking? ?

Question

Blue Damselfly Fresh

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I drink dew from the leaf of low lying bush

I fly, intermittently resting.

I only fly slowly...

I’m not in a rush,

My fresh opened wings I am testing.

The blue in your eyes is

Beckoning me,

Like a shimmering, wanton Light.

I glide through the air

Smoothly intently

Closer... Intent on the sight.

When you notice... I dash off in fright.

Answer 1

that's pretty funny that the guy said it was about George Bush

Answer 2

I found this adorable!  I loved that you spoke in first person and took us on the flight, right up to dashing off in fright!

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Answer 3

blue damselfly..interesting.

Answer 4

is this about George Bush???

Answer 5

Is this about the Olympics?

Answer 6

I like that peom it's good.

Answer 7

very nice

in made me think! :)

Answer 8

I like your metaphors, the poem flows, very nice imagery, very nice poem!

Answer 9

If the female is a damselfly, is the male a dam fly? Actually, this was very pretty. Reminds me of looking at the girls in Jr. HIgh, but expressed in mature language. good job. It's a 9 and a half. peace

Answer 10

Like a moth to the flame

star adverse to fame

action before  blame

I fear the essence

of my name

Very nice ..... I was there.

Answer 11

Are you funny again ?. xD