Mi Frn Made This Poem Is It Good ?

Question

Baby your always in my mind day or night ,light or dark and even in my dreams , your smile lightens up my darkest nightmares while the shine of your eyes makes my heart beat even faster, you’ll always be my true love and will have a place deep inside my heart.

good bad or horrible ?

Answer 1

a nice try, but not much thought is expressed and nothing to be remembered of.

Answer 2

To basic, not much thought behind your message and crude in it's deliverence, not a great attempt.

Answer 3

Its Alright

Heres is my poem im 11 and if i get answers ill start a poetry blog

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Answer 4

If you want honesty, its a bit cheesy--especially the use of "baby"