Mirror, Mirror By Indigo Black.(poetry) This is a poem i wrote tell me what you think of it.?

Question

Reflextions Of My Images

Flashes Back And Forth

Hating The Way I Look

And How Long It Took

4 Me 2 Understand

How Ugly I' am

A Boy Becomes A Man

The Things That He Has Done

& Battles He Has To Overcome

From Crime

& Even Crossin His Own Guidelines

This Story Of Mine

Mirror, Mirror

The Fear I see in me

& What Life Could Probably Be

Answer 1

deep dude. i love it.

side corrections: line 1 should be 'reflections'

Answer 2

Reflections of your life,

They will never leave,

But things can get Better,

As each want turns to need.

Keep looking at your image,

See beyond your plight,

The mirror only tells you,

What you want it to.

No matter what it is you've done,

You'll Find the Real you!

And with Courage,and Forgiveness

The Rest is up to you.

Thankyou that was well expressed,

and whats more,shows you care!