Mirror, Mirror - Comments on my poem please and thank you?

Question

Mirror, Mirror

Play is fair in these mirrored rites

Semblance ample in blackest nights

As low-lit wall mimics this frisk

Shadows cast gray in wayward risk

Replication seductively pleases

Tang for pangs as wanton teases

Corruptly kissed, lipped, and lusted

Teethily nipped lures buttons busted

Spread as fare on stretch of table

Spooned and forked as much as able

Ever eyed and ever delighted

Ever swallowed as cups arighted

Drunkenness to glut our secret zest

Unleashed these bounds as tongues confessed

There to here what is nigh tasted?

Morsel to feast lest drop is wasted

© cae 4/29/08

Answer 1

It's great if you like to throw words on a piece of paper and rhyme the last one.

Answer 2

it's good! no..it's REALLY good! keep up the good work!

Answer 3

A hotty.  I think I have the vapors!  :O)))))

A fantastic romp, thanks so much.

Answer 4

dum

Answer 5

Not bad, very good imagery. Definately keep writing.

Answer 6

I was impressed by your poem, made the imagination work with each word!  Well done, interesting to say the least! Cheers!!