Misplaced Anger.........?

Question

Buried anger

deep inside

why do YOU control my life?

am I an idiot

or are you confused?

why don't I get the right to choose?

I have plans

so, you see,

your anger is misplaced on me

it's yourself

where the anger should be

directed

the only cure

is my resurrection

from the chains

that binds my decisions on you

now all I have to say is

Adieu!

Answer 1

Beautiful <33

It's very good, and powerful...

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If I had to rate this I would give it an 8 or 9 out of ten.

Sam <33