Mohammad ali?

Question

i am writing a biography for an 8th grade assiment about mohammad ali......can u check if the introduction is good can u add more to it and make it sound better....thanx alot

When Cassius Clay first stepped in the ring, it was to get revenge for his stolen bike. Little did he know that his life would change greatly from this moment on. He end up winning all major amateur boxing titles in America . Also known as "The greatest", Mohammad ali winning the world championship threee times.

Answer 1

its very goog just change the beggianing cuase it sounds like a story...and grammar

Answer 2

Great wording! Just make sure your grammar is correct. (e.g. ali should be capitalized)

Answer 3

He did not step into the ring at 10. He simply tracked down the bicycle thief, and, 'boxed his ears.' I have seen him fight old Archie Moore, Henry Cooper at Highbury (back in '63 - I was there), the 2 Liston fights, Zora Folley, Ernie Terrell, Cleveland Williams,  the fights with 'Smoking' Joe Frazier, and, George Foreman. Muhammad Ali belongs in the same 'Pantheon of Supreme Champions', as, Jack (the Manassa Mauler) Dempsey, Joe Lewis, and, Rocky Marciano. There shall never be another.

Answer 4

ok then you should read the autobiography that he wrote about himself. check it out of the library. you will find a lot of good information in there and it is a good book to read.

Answer 5

At the age of 12, Ali took up boxing to avenge a stolen bike, but that theft would change the world as we know it in and out of the ring.  He is an Olympic gold medalist, a world champion, and the epitomy of a Hero.

Answer 6

Black...What did i win

Answer 7

Its Muhammad Ali

Answer 8

How old was Ali (not ali) step into the ring....when he was 10?  Also check your spelling.

Answer 9

yep, thats pretty accurate

http://www.ali.com/greatest/the-boxer.as...