More c**p?

Question

this boy feels glad when others are feeling bad

this boy laughs when violence becomes the new fad

he burns under the rain

when you feel good this boy is filled with pain

he's got an uncontrollable appetite for sin

everywhere he is followed by a path of destruction

Answer 1

The rhyme is macho forced.

Answer 2

Yes!

When like Wordworth Shelly or Keats

You strive to write a masterpiece.

The merest hint of critique averse

Will make you fight to protect your verse.

But if like me your aim is that

to write something albeit c**p

to tittilate or amuse your readership

then it matters not if your poem's *****

Just ensure that in the end

you achieve your aim my friend

And in this I confirm that

Its much better than half the c**p

Answer 3

This boy sounds mentally troubled...

Wow, i love the poem by the way....Its catchy, and very interesting

XD

Well done