More of these Dadaesque tone poems; exercises in sound. Do you like this one?

Question

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SOL ETUDE

Sun hot

Sand hot

Sun on

Sandlot

Bright white

Daylight

Play time

Delight

I say

We go

Lake

Winnebago

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Answer 1

"Hi!",

Great poem. I did have more to say, but my laptop just got disconnected from the Internet and I can't be bothered to re-type it.

All I've got to say is:

"Take me to Winnebago".

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

Answer 2

That was extremely cool. I haven't seen something like this done before. It has a quirky kind of logic to it. I like it.

Answer 3

This one is really fun!

Lake Winnebago is in WI. Need directions?

Answer 4

Great ! I tried it with "Ford  Transit Camper Van" but it's not the same !

Answer 5

A popsicle for my overheated brain!  Cool!

Answer 6

Like all your serious poems, it sings.

Answer 7

Sounds like fun...the poem and a trip to the lake sounds like fun.  I love to play with words too.  Play on ;)

Answer 8

In a Winnebago?  Nice sounds.

Answer 9

You have room for one more?  Cheers!!

Answer 10

I like the sound - especially the first stanza ♥

Answer 11

Your étude can be sung to Chopin's, Op. 10, no. 9; but his étude is not in Sol, but the minor key of Fa.  

Your Eng-ga-lund Converb has one sharp, however; so it is in the key of Sol.

Sol(i)tude indeed, J. Alfred, if `we go/Lake/Winnebago.'

Answer 12

It sounds nice.

Answer 13

what wistful wanker would wallow woefully wondering, will Willi wear washed women's worn wear with Worcestershire?-blurey