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More poetry, from me, yippee?!?

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Final Goodbye

you'll forget my name

& continue on with your game.

you won't remember me.

just give it time, you'll see.

it's time you go to go your own way

never again to hear what i say.

as i turn to walk,

don't begin to talk.

nothing more can be done,

for it was no longer fun.

i won't look back & wonder why,

because this is my final goodbye.

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  1. i like this one better than the other one you wrote. definitely my favorite that I've seen so far...  


  2. i Like It, How Mine?

    It's Called "I Live In A Pile Of $hit"

    I live in my bed, the b@stards will come to take me away soon,

    they make me go to bed three hours before noon.

    there's p**s on my clothes, there's p**s on my sheets,

    there's p**s on my face and there's p**s on my feets.

    there's a tube rammed up my ***,

    on the wall there's a picture of grass.

    the tube up my *** leads to a chamber pot,

    i feel like some sort of rusty old robot.

    for dinner i ordered soup,

    they bring my a plate of my own p**p.

    i want some painkillers, they give me a goat,

    i feel like there's oppression being rammed down my throat.

    My relatives visit me at half-past five

    don't leave me alone with them, they'll eat me alive!

    i wish that i was dead, that they would pull out the drip

    and detach my head.

    It's About an old, incontinent man with alziemers, in a old peoples home.

  3. *round of applause*... Luv it!

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