More poetry...?

Question

I thought it was going to be easy

To get you out of my system

But after a few years

You came back into my vision

It was blurry

But I would never forget your face

All those years together

All of them went to waste

I would take you to the movies

Play a lil b-ball

Be there to catch you

If you were to fall

When you were hurtin

You would close your pretty eyes

Lean on my shoulder

If you had to cry

Remembering those years

How they all were wasted

Now I'm livin in regret

I'm the one who has to face it

I've lost you forever

Now your just a memory

Just a relationship

That wasn't meant to be

Getting over you

Its gonna be tough

You'll always be in my heart

Girl Peace & Love!

Donald Lee Holland

Answer 1

not favoring the last sentence but overall it's good!!

like this partt..

When you were hurtin

You would close your pretty eyes

Lean on my shoulder

If you had to cry

how about mine?

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