Mr. Sun Corrected?

Question

Mr Sun

Outside today

We go to play

The sun is out

There is no doubt

Shining bright

It give out light.

Sunglasses on

Sunlight shown,

Clouds passing by

Is the sun in the sky?

Is it playing hid-n-seek?

Or coming out to peek?

Mr. Sun where are you.

I can see the sky so blue.

What's that peeking out

Now I see the sun all about!

Answer 1

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