My Acrostic Poem Please?

Question

What Do You Think Of My Acrostic Poem?

It is not done yet I'm still adding more and trying to make it flow but what do you think of it so far.

My prompt for the poem is in the authors notes.

Its not my usual type of poem since I'm custom to writing dark poems.

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4541657

Answer 1

I can certainly identify with you. I myself am custom to writing dark poetry. Trying to write anything else makes my brain hurt.

What you currently have written is very good indeed! I have looked at the photograph linked in the author's notes and I feel your poem [[so far]] has captured the mood perfectly. =)