My Poem: Cry Cry Hubby ... Critique!

Question

Cry cry cry

Cry cry Darling

I am not going to awake

Cry cry baby

You want love

No no

Tomorrow I go to work

Cry cry honey

It is 3 o’clock in the morning

Cry cry hubby

Turn your back

And have a nap

Answer 1

it sorta reminds me of the song how i could just kill a man by charlotte sometimes.

cry baby cry baby cry.

btw is your poem about doing the nasty? haha

but besides that its fine, needs more though.