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My Poem....please read?

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Bigger is Better

There once was a man who lived in a mansion.

He wanted a bigger and larger expansion.

He needed more room for his old sick wife.

Because after all, that house was her life.

He built the house bigger until his wife passed away.

He decided to stop building on that lonely day.

Then something so strange appeared in his yard.

It was from heaven, it was an angel guard.

The angel had said he needed this yard for God.

The man’s teary eyes glistened and he gave him a nod.

For the man’s yard was heaven for all people who’ve passed.

Then the man had stopped crying, he’d seen her at last.

The man had then realized heaven was quite small.

So he tore down his mansion, brickwork and all.

He built a small shack with a window and door.

Because of his deed, his happiness was more.

The man had grown old but died with a smile.

He hadn’t seen his old wife in such a great while

What do you guys think?

Thanks for replies. :)

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  1. omg i almost cryed nice man  speek for all of us when i say we want more!!!

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