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My Poem "University of Love" Critique Please?

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When you enter the University of Love

You will be going into great adventure

Study hard and practice

You will learn about love fundamentals

Innovative techniques and strategies

There will be

Quizzes and love tests

First semester will be about kissing

You need to know about queues and signals

The syllable is exciting

You will learn like expert

Kiss softly and not in a hurry

Kiss sweet like honey

Kiss with a passion

Watch the lips when it curls

When it smell like flower

Kiss, kiss and kiss

The neck and every where else

Do the home work with your lover

Get closer and huddle

Lay on the couch and practice

if you get love fever

You should be ready

With a fire extinguisher

You should know how to put the fire

Do not flunk the tests

Otherwise, you

keep practice and repeat

Keep your spirit high

Do not get discouraged

Get closer and huddle

Snuggle

Do not flinch

And finally you will pass

And ultimately

You will

Get your love diploma

With honor

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  1. You have put a lot of work into this beautiful piece. I earned my diploma and my wings.

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