My Short poems about experiences, love, death and life.... Please read them

Question

I'm 15 y/o female and have been writing poetry for around 3 months. This is a small collection of my pieces. Please read them and coment.

The Link to my Poems:

http://l3luel3ubbles.piczo.com/mypoems?preview=y&sl=0&st=0&cr=2

Answer 1

They're not bad, don't get me wrong.

But they're so plain! Try to spice it up a bit, make each line longer.