My Stand-up routine...?

Question

Please tell me what you think of this segment of my stand-up act. I'm by no means professional yet but would like to be there someday soon.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=Ej7xSw6cYe8

Answer 1

I enjoyed it very much.  You seem very at ease up there.  I appreciate the lack of cursing since I do think that there is a lot of profanity just for the sake of profanity.  There are times when I think your routine sounds a bit too memorized like you haare reciting a precise phrase that you wrote down.  The best example I can remember is your lead-ins to your mom and grandad.  I would skip the "I'd like to share thios with you"-part and get right into the material.

But overall, I liked it and would want to see more