My Sweet Evangeline(Poem)Opinions please?

Question

What do you think of my short poem written for a child?

Tell Me Your Opinions On My Poem Please?

I just wrote it for this contest http://allpoetry.com/contest/2412877

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4410529

Just give me your honest but not too harsh opinions.

Answer 1

It is a lovely poem, full of heartfelt emotion and graceful beauty.  Sometimes the most remarkable poems come to us all in a moment and are written quickly. This is a fortunate child to have such a tribute written for her.  Thank you.

Answer 2

children likes moon and horse

car too

these shoud in the poem

Answer 3

I thought it was full of love and it was wonderful...any child would be proud to read that as an adult!