My Upcoming Yugioh Dark Deck (Non - D.A.D)?

Question

This is my upcoming Dark Deck that i am trying to make. Leave some comments on how i can make it better. Heres my upcoming deck..

Monsters (34)

2 Dark Nephthys

1 Dark Airknight Parshath

1 Spirit Reaper

2-3 Cauis the Shadow Monarch

1 Dark Magician

1 Night Assailant

1 D.D Assailant

1 Jinzo

2 Cyber Ouroboros

2 Dark Crusader

3 Obsidian Dragon

1 Evil Hero Malicious Edge

1 Snipe Hunter

1 The End of Anubis

2 Mystic Tomato

1 Bazoo the Soul Eater

2 Skilled Dark Magician

2 Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer

2 Doomsday Horror

1 Gravi Crush Dragon

1 Treeborn Frog

1 Sangan

1 Breaker the Magical Warrior

Spells (9)

2 Fires of Doomsday

1 Dark Eruption

1 Monster Reborn

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

2 Trade - in

1 Foolish Burial

1 Heavy Storm

Traps (6)

1 Blast with Chain

1 Negate Attack

1 Hallowed Life Barrier

1 Trap Jammer

1 Bottomless Trap Hole

1 D.D.R

Thanks for looking :D

Answer 1

Dood, way too many monsters. I know you tried to make up for it by taking out a ton of Spell and Traps, but those are what gives major support to your monsters.

-Dark Knight Parshath

-Dark Magician

-3 Obsidian Dragon (Really not worth the effort)

-The End of Anubis

-Bazoo the Soul Eater

-2 Skilled Dark Magician

-2 Doomsday Horror

-Gravi Crush Dragon

-Sangan

-2Trade In (your have 2 targets)

-D.D. Dynamite (if thats what you mean by trap D.D.R)

That should give your some consistency.

Add in

+Brain Control

+Bottomless Trap Hole

+Divine Wrath

+1-2 Sakuretsu Armor

+Nobleman of Crossout

+Soul Exchange

+2Allure of Darkness

That should put you back around 40-some cards. If you need a little different flavor then email me at [e-mail] , I'd be happy to help you further.

Happy Dueling