My Yugioh Deck please leave inputs thanks:D?

Question

This deck is base on one hit KO + keep the opponent guessing

Fusion: Thousand Eyes Restrict

Monsters:

Sagan

Wall Of Illusion

3xManju Of The Ten Thousand Hands

Stealth Bird

Dark Master Zorc

Sillva, Warlord of Dark World

Morphing Jar#2(thinking of a replacement)

2xRelinquished

Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World

Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World

Reign-Beaux, Overlord of Dark World

Break The Magical Warrior

Ruin, Queen Of Oblivion

The WIcked Dreadroot (for fun)

3xVampire Ladies

Traps:

Gravity Bind

Call Of the Haunted

Waboku

Magical Cylinder

2xDust Tornados

2xCompulsory Evaculation Devices

Buttomless Trap Hole

Robbin Goblin

Magic:

Mystical Space Typhoon

Mystic Plasma Zone

2xBlack Illusion Rituals

Lighting Vortex

Nobleman Crossout

Contract Of the Dark Master

Sword Of Revealing Light

Dedication Through Light and Darkness

End Of The World Ritual

Metamorphosis(for fusion

Answer 1

i am not a very good deck maker, but all I have to say is some of ur cards r banned so it cant be used to tourney's. I suggest taking them out

here is a site where u can check which r banned or not.

www.yugioh-card.com

other than that I suggest you putting in 3 gracful charity ( if you play round that lets you use banned cards) so you can use them to discard your dark world cards to use their effect, you should also add in a mirror force AND taking out your call of the haunted for a monster reborn. ( monster reborn is now limited and call of haunted is now banned) you should also add in a snipe hunter so it could let you discard a card ( your dark world cards ) and it will give you a chance to destroy one of your opponets cards.

Answer 2

Needs more Pikachu.

Answer 3

what is your type of deck or are they just  a bunch of random cards put to gether and if they are your not going to win many times oh ye try and give your geck some tactics

Answer 4

just random cards, it might keep them guessing, but it will never beat them consistently. if you ever win, it will be out of pure luck.

and im speaking of good players. you might be able to beat other noobs that use structure decks or use randomness as a strategy, but normal and average players wouldnt lose to this.

breaker is banned also.