My best friend wrote this poem, and I thought it was intresting. What do you think of it?

Question

I wish I was a litte girl again,

because bruised knees heal faster then a broken heart.

Answer 1

There is actually a word for this kind of poem- one that tells a story in a sentence. sorry i can't remember what it is, because this is one of the best examples i have ever read.

Mine is : when nothing is rightfully left, nothing is left fully right. it is called "Inheritance" (c)2004 S.L. Nichols

By the way, you should do what i just did- for anything you post put the copyright symbol and date it and of course name the author.

Answer 2

I think it's pretty cool. If she wanted to develop it she could use this as a title:

I wish I was a litte girl again

and than add lines like the one you mentioned maybe 8-9 more observations (slightly edited):

bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts.

Answer 3

It's cute. I like it--it's short, simple, and sweet.

And, all so true! It's just all so easy to relate too; a breath of fresh air.

Answer 4

I think that was really deep and it was good

Answer 5

Wow.

That one little sentence is really meaningful and can tell a lot about a poet.

In a simple message, your best friend has just written a really deep thought.

That's amazing. I love it. :D

Answer 6

short but saweet

Answer 7

Wow!

It makes me hope I'm not the one who broke your heart.

Well constructed, simply said, just like you were listening to a little girl.

Answer 8

i like it

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