My broken heart (poem) that i posted earlier?

Question

OK here it is hopefully with more corrections.. thanks.. for reading.. it's really S****y but like i liked it totally but there was a few points where i missed my line.. like didn't write down what was on my mind in time.. so i had to use something else that was way worse. but i think that still kind of fits the original structure of the poem. although it doesn't 100 percent.. i still feel like saying that is what i mean. here. the poem

Answer 1

You do really know how to play and work with words.

This is a blessing. Many people don't know how.

I loved "apart we are nothing, together we are strong, this broken heart

must move on".

Exactely what I want to tell you. Keep on going, move on.

LIGHTBRIGHT!FRIEND!