My business idea...what do you think?

Question

im in first yr of uni and we watched a video onthe the profitablity of oil and gas. basically iwas thinking that ill wait a few years until a new form of energy is used to power cars such as a new type of feul or i heard somthing about hydrogen cells to power cars, or even using neuclear power to power cars...when this happens ill jump on it and start making parts that you need to the car with...for example, hydrogen cells, im sure bmw wont make the cells them selves they will purchase it from a company that makes them. i think this is a good idea beacuse firstly itll be a new techonolgy so there will be alot of room to grow, and with every new technology som really big companies cant adapt to change and go out of business, making room for people like me...so what do u think?

Answer 1

bad idea... and like the others said, poor grammar.  If you want to create a business plan that people will want to read and in turn fund, you are going to have to work on your grammar.

Answer 2

Well, I counted at least fifteen grammatical errors, wrong punctuations, lack of capitalizations, misspellings and incomplete sentences.

I can't believe you're in college!

My first recommendation would be that you take a refresher course in basic English before even thinking about writing a business plan for your business idea.

Answer 3

Look, nobody can understand what the h**l you are on about because you have not got a grip on spelling and grammar.  You will never sell an idea to anyone if you are not making any sense.  

You may not value punctuation, grammar, etc., but the hard reality is you have to communicate with other human beings to trade/deal with them.  

Also, there's a kind of disrespect to others, in that you are making them work very hard to decipher what you are saying.  Why should we make the effort, if you can't? After all, it's your idea.

Answer 4

I completely agree with almost all of the people here.  Use spell check at least for the next time and be prepared for bad news when you get one of those required research reports back from class.  Also, if you try and get funding from a bank chances are you will not get funded.  Sorry for the bleak news but BMW develops all of their technology in house.

Answer 5

Here's the deal.  Its who gets there firstest with the mostest.

That's what I don't like about your plan.  You're going to sit back and wait till you see which way people are going then try to run out ahead of them.  If BMW starts building fuel cell cars you can bet they'll have a supplier for fuel cells or build them themselves.  

If you come in second you're going to be the first loser.  The Beta-max vs VHS battle is a good example.   It didn't matter that Beta Max was a better product, VHS was there firstest with the mostest.    Once a new power source starts taking hold the others are going to be frozen out of the market, in much the same way.  

You're not going to win a race by waiting at the starting line or have a winning business waiting on everyone else.   You need to take the lead.

Answer 6

Don't major in grammar!!!