My first poem is it alright?

Question

Dangerous minds

Beautiful faces

Things I want most

In 2 different places

Deserts and tundras

Oceans and skies

Puppies and kittens

Snails and flies

Joy and laughter

Anguish and strife

Experience them all

The answer to life

Answer 1

this is just amazing and so beautifull

keep it up

Answer 2

um.... je ne sais pas.... c'est le barb

Answer 3

Quite good. It's straight to the point, thought provoking, clean, simple and meaningful. It has a good rhyme scheme and a consistent rhythm. It's a very good poem, I consider.

You just need to arrange your ideas and edit a bit. But other than that, it's a fantastic poem. 4.2/5.

Answer 4

Very nicely put, I think you got something there, there might be talent in them there hills!!  Very Nice!!!  Cheers!!!

Answer 5

I think it is very good. I understand what

you mean about taking the good with

bad in life to really experience living.

I give it an A+ :D

Answer 6

stick with it it's a good start i like the massage