My friend & i are in the process of writing a promotion speech, we made up some quotes. are these quotes good?

Question

Don’t look back on the bad days, never forget the good ones, and look forward for the adventure to come.

Don’t waste your time on jealousy, sometimes you’re above and sometimes you’re below. Your adventure will be long but it the end it will only affect you.

Answer 1

1st one, instead write: Don’t look back on the bad days, never forget the good ones, and look forward to the adventures to come.

2nd one, instead write:Don’t waste your time on jealousy. Sometimes you’re above and sometimes you’re below. Your adventure will be long, but it the end it will only affect you.

Answer 2

Em... not my cup of tea. Sorry. It's not really straight-forward. I think you have to state it very clearly because it's for promotion right? You have to hook them immediately. That's my opinion and good luck!

Answer 3

Please explain how you can "make up a quote".   A quote is something someone already said that is worthy of being repeated by many others.  I don't mean to criticize, but am just asking the question -- also not trying to be mean.

If you are interested in some promotion sayings, try

"Forget the bad days, remember the good ones, and look forward to an adventurous future."

or

"Jealousy is a waste of time, it hurts not only you, but others too"

I don't see where jealous is an adventure, it is an emotion that causes distress.

Answer 4

I think they are I also think some people would really believe you.