My friend wrote this poem about me! What do you think of it?

Question

When i look into her eyes i see many things...

When i look into her eyes i see an innocent little girl...

When i look into her eyes i see everything thats heppened in her past...

When i look into her eyes i see all those memorys she would rather forget...

When i look into her eyes i see her on those days she got bullied at school...

When i look into her eyes i see her those times she sat in the corner too frightened to move...

When i look into her eyes i see her those nights she was left crying herself to sleep...

When i look deeper into her eyes i see alot more...

When i look deeper into her eyes i see her on that day she ranaway...

When i look deeper into her eyes i see her those times she was kneeling on the floor, shaking, knife hovering inches from her wrist...

When i look deeper into her eyes i see her those times she was so lonley she surfed chatrooms, desperatly searching for someone who would talk to her...

When i look straight through her eyes, into her soul, i see even more...

When i look this deep into her soul it leaves her with nothing to hide...

When i look into her soul i see memorys of loved ones that will never be erased...

When i look into her soul i see that there isnt so much as an ounce of evil in her...

When i look into her soul i her for what she truly is...

a confused little child...

and nothing more...

Answer 1

wow... he must be quite engrossed with you to look into your eyes so many times.  :-)

it's a nice and touching peom.

hope you don't mind my next comment...

do you need help? the poem sounds rather sad to me.

Answer 2

they must love u and have a crash on u

Answer 3

Hmm.

Its sweet.

But im not liking the last line..

"and nothing more"

or the first one.

"i see many things"

Each line could be worded a little better :|

Not bad,

I like it :]

Answer 4

i do like it but they have when i look into too many times! but it is very sweet! i guy that wrote u a peom must really like u !! good luck

Answer 5

its very nice  and touching but does not suite me

Answer 6

pretty and sensitive..

Answer 7

I think it is very powerful. But I also think that your friend could erase some of the When I look and put commas or &.

Otherwise your friend must really love you : ) reminds me of my friendship.

Answer 8

My S****y poem. XD

Thanks for all the nice comments.

And the title is supposed to say BOY friend. XD

Thanks again guys.

Answer 9

well she/he is either talking about you or her/him

Answer 10

NICE!

Answer 11

Brava!

Answer 12

you must be a very good and true friend if she thinks so much of you.

Give her congrats from me ;)

Will you be my friend too?

Answer 13

1.So it's a poem?!

2. Try spelling correctly AT LEAST when you write a poem.