My friends poem. =\

Question

how am i supposed to tell her i dont like it?

or should i just lie and say its good?

what do you think of it?

here it is-

im walking.

im searching.

im seeing.

im loving.

im hugging.

im kissing.

im leaving.

your leaving.

your hiding.

your ignoring.

your known

were unknown.

were together.

were unheard.

im a secret.

your a secret.

were a secret.

Answer 1

dont listen to haters

Answer 2

O.o....uh....well...um...it's definitely original! :D .....okay, it's not that good... =.='

Edit: Be honest, but at the same time gentle. If your friend is proud of it...then I would hate to be you right about now!

Answer 3

Tell her : oh...its really unique but you should add some stuff...you cant really make a legit poem with just one noun and one verb.

Answer 4

Umm I really don't know what to say I don't like it at all and it seems to have no point. Go ahead and tell her what you think is right. for me i would be honost but i would definetly say it in a way that doesnt hurt her feelings. Say like," Your poem still needs improvement." or something like that ok?

Answer 5

tell her that it needs work. maybe you could show her some poetry from good poets and she'll get the hint herself when she sees that no GOOD poet writes like she does.

Answer 6

Your friend

Could bend

This poem

Upside down

So we'd clown

But then we'd die

Because this sucks

like spinach pie