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My life check my poem please ;)?

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my life seem to loose color

i don't know why

i simply wanna fly

looking at the grey sky

i realize

i will never fly

i lost my wings

i lost my way

i wont be the same

this is awful

i simply don't know why

i'm gonna cry

i just wanna fly

but is imposible now

i found my wings

they are black and broken now

and i know

i will never fly

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  1. this is a very powerful poem and anyone with good taste would see this. It is an amazing, unique poem. And anyone who can feel this way will respect it even more than I do, and I do a lot. Please write more and keep me posted.  would recommend sending it in to magazines or to poetry contests. again, it is awesome!


  2. i really like it

    :0

  3. Thats an amazing poem! A little sad but really really well written.

  4. Maybe it could use a bit better flow but it was one of the most unique poems ive read (which is a good thing dont wry!). It was really great even though it was very sad. Keep it up!

  5. wow, I liked the poem, sad but very good.

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