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My love poem what do you think?

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You meant the world to me, you said you felt the same,

Now your playing around with my head making me go insane,

The first time that we kissed i felt a love so true,

I loved you boy and i thought you loved me too.

As lips touched I felt a passion inside,

a feeling of love i didn't wanna hide,

I never felt like this with any boy before,

But on wednesday night I couldn't believe what i saw.

That once love so close and true,

Was erased from your memory did you have a clue?

The embarassent the pain that you caused to me,

If you were hear now boy I wish that you could see.

The tears ive cried, a heart thats broken,

And you rub it in just like some kind of token,

Mi make-ups faded blacks running down mi eyes,

Maybe your actions werent so wise.

Maybe one day darling you will see,

What you are doing letting go of me,

Because that day when you realise what you wanna do,

I won't be there to love and care for you.

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  1. no its actualy cool better then mine.


  2. "Before" and "saw" don't rhyme.  


  3. Honestly it sounds like a Rap Song

  4. It is very heart touching.Keep the good job up.

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