My new poem i think ill name it "ryan"?

Question

this is a poem it like me writing from the past

Ryan

whenever i hear Ryan

i think about that day

when you triggered the pain

abuse is what made me

abuse is what breaks me

yelling at me

what the h**l do you want

just trying to be a normal kid

cant seem to fit in

no matter where i go

its all your fault

whenever i hear Ryan

the pain that comes too

i can never escape it

the pain thats from you

Answer 1

Your emotion came across with your poem, Cheers!!

Answer 2

i would not give this person ryan the satisfaction of naming a poem after him. i have a suggestion for a name but i would surely be sensored. sorry about your experience i have gone through something like that by a family member. so hang in there friend and the best always  mike

Answer 3

i agree, it should be ryan, cute poem

Answer 4

i like it...i would call it either Ryan or The Trigger

Answer 5

I agree with Mike S. he doesn't deserve the credit for your good work.  The poem has a lot of raw emotion. Keep writing to release that energy and emotion. Another thing, always capitalize your "I". It shows self worth, self esteem and self respect. Don't ever give someone else the opportunity to make you feel beneath them again. Your poem is one of a kind, thanks for sharing.

Answer 6

i like it..kindaa.&&definitely name it ryan?

how about mine?

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

uhmm? i answered it!! can you answer mine please?

i said i like it..&&keep the name ryan?

can you please answer mine now?