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My newest poem...Opinions?

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Here's my third poem ever!!!

Is it Possible?

I love you more then anything in the world.

Life.

Food.

Air.

Water.

You name it.

So how do I show it?

No matter what I do,

I don't how to tell you how much I love you.

Nothing I seem to do adds up.

Some people say,

"Just love them."

Well, I do and it's not enough.

Some people say,

"Buy them stuff."

But that wouldn't add up.

Some people say,

"Just tell them."

Unfortunetly, there are no words great enough.

Some people say,

"Give them all your attentain."

They have it and more, and it's not good enough.

Why don't they have scientists

For this sort of thing?

It would be good for the Earth.

Study how to show love instead of;

How to make nuclear weapons,

How to destroy,

and how to hate.

So you tell me,

How do I show

That special person,

How much I love them.

When words and actions aren't enough?

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  1. this is a good poem but it could be a little bit correctly spelled but besides that i like it it explains how i feel in some way  

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