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My newest poem "Love Highway" is it any good?

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Love Highway

You’re driving me crazy

You’re making me smile

It’s our long journey

It’s worth every mile

The signs tell us “merge”

The lanes will collide

Guide us together

Guide us on this ride

Put the music on

Put the windows down

Get freed by the air

Get lost in the sound

My road trip driver

My lover and friend

Our ride continues

Our love will not end

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  1. I love it it is great, it really is. It describes perfectly how you feel with the person you love. It is the perfect description of a "Love Highway"


  2. Yes its good.

  3. No. Sorry.

  4. It's okay.

  5. There's a couple places where it sounds a little cliche - "you're making me smile," "our love will not end," but I think you should try and put music to it. It'd probably work pretty well as a pop/pop-punk song.

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